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Thursday, June 21, 2018

jack

Jack
There once a boy named jack
who was a little bit wack
His rimes were very poor
And when someone came to his door

They turned around and went go to death's door
-Elijah

1 comment:

  1. Hi Elijah,
    I really like the amazing rhymes you got there
    I love how you added humor into your poem
    Ka pai

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